Wednesday, September 2, 2009

A New United States

When you look back at the history of our nation, many events pop out that changed us for better or worse. Independence, slavery, and civil rights all helped contribute to what our country is today. However, the most important event was the Civil War, which pitted brothers against brothers, fathers against sons. The price of this war? Casualties on the Confederate side totaled to about 260,000, while the Union side lost over 360,000. Just these two combined accounted for nearly all the deaths in all other American wars combined.

         One large political change after the Civil War was the increase in the federal government's power and authority. Before the war, laws that were passed by the federal government gave them more control over individuals, but after the war, no state ever threatened leaving the Union again. Also, because of the war, the Northern economies flourished while the Southern economies (mostly plantations run by slaves) suffered.

         The most revolutionary change brought on by the Civil War was not economic or technological. Instead, it was the freedom for African Americans. On September 22nd 1862, President Abraham Lincoln issued the first draft of the Emancipation Proclamation. The second order named the confederate states that it would apply to.  This led to the ratification of the Thirteenth Amendment in 1865, which stated “neither slavery nor involuntary servitude, except as a punishment for crime whereof the party shall have been duly convicted, shall exist within the United States.” With this amendment, slavery was abolished in the United States and over 4 million African American slaves were now free.

5 comments:

  1. The number of slaves which were free after the abolishment is impressive!
    I liked your summary particulary the beginning. Nice job.

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  2. This is a really good summary Yotam! Instead of saying "our nation" mabye put "the United States". Just for the sake of being universal. Although I personally believe that the most significant and important event in U.S. History is the revolutionary war, you brought up many good points to make me consider otherwise. Good Job!

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  3. I like how you added the number of casualties in the civil war. I didn't know that it makes up more than all other wars combined. My suggestion is to add a image to go along with the blog for visual learners. Great job!

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  4. I really liked your indtroduction.it was intresting how you started it,it wasnt boring. you have very good information.very well done.

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  5. The number of casualties was really scary. I thought it was interesting that the union lost way more people tho. overall it was really well put together. good job!

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