Saturday, September 19, 2009

The Growth of Our Country

In 1840 expansion west increased tremendously. People believed that it is predestine by God that America would expand to the Pacific Ocean. This belief was referred to as manifest destiny. Most people moved because of the large amount of land. Later merchants and manufactures fallowed to take advantage of the new market. Also the Mormons moved west to escape persecution. They had been founded by Joseph Smith in New York but after moving the community several times to avoid persecution they decided to move west. They travelled threw Nebraska, and Wyoming and stopped near the Great Salt Lake in what is now Utah.

Settlers fallowed Native American trails as well as making their own. The Oregon Trail took travelers from Independence Missouri to Oregon City, Oregon. A smooth trip could till take months.

Texas won its independence from Spain in the 1820’s. They then allowed Americans to settle there to get more people to live there. The amount of English speaking people soon exceeded the amount of Spanish speakers. The English Anglos were primarily from the south and had brought slaves with them, but Mexico had abolished slavery. Also Antonio Lopez de Santa Anna, Mexico’s president suspended local powers, which started the Texas Revolution. The Anglo troops gathered in the Alamo, a mission and fort. Santa Anna and his troops attacked the Alamo, and Texas declared its independence. After 13 days of fighting the Anglos won there independence, and on December 29, 1845 Texas joined the United States.

Spencer

13 comments:

  1. I like your posting because you have done well in summarizing. The basic information about manifest destiny is included. Good job.

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  2. You did really well and it was written smoothly. There were a few grammatical/spelling errors so maybe you could just double check before posting. Overall it was really good

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  3. Short and good summary of how different groups of people contributed to the expansion of US territory. But there are some grammatical and spelling errors such as "threw."

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  4. Good job adding details. My suggestion is adding a picture. Good job overall

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  5. Your summary includes many interesting and important information. I found it interesting where the different groups of people settled.

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  6. Your details were good, but there were a few grammatical errors. For example, the first sentence you could have included a comma after "1840".

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  7. I liked the summary but it could have conveyed more information. Additionally adding pictures would have been nice.

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  8. I like the summary, but he transitions were very out of place, but over all good job.

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  9. Overall good, but some grammatical and spelling mistakes are to be corrected.

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  10. Very concise, straight to the point. Good job. It would be better if some relevant pictures or videos were added.

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  11. I liked that your post was just the right length for me to stay attentive! I would proofread the post because there are some grammatical errors. Good job.

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  12. I find it strange that people moved by order of god, and not a felling of adventure and fortune.

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  13. I loved your essay. It was short but was full of great easy to follow information that i learn a lot from =]

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